In our skittles writing we were learning to do show not tell.
I need to do this to give my reader a good picture in their mind.
I think I am doing well in my writing because I have been writing good stories that are not real.
I need to work on my punctuation, I do not really know where to put full stops.
I hope you liked my Skittles writing.
I think I am a rubric 4 for vocab.
When I read this Imogen I can imagine the Skittles right there in front of me! Well done on using so many excellent descriptive words.
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